I don’t want patent leather, and I’d prefer a rounded toe to a square or pointed one. I’m also not too balanced, so a slightly wide heel would be to my benefit, but anything will do. If you know anywhere that has shoes even remotely similar to what I’m looking for, please let me know! They don’t have to meet all my specifications, I just want these shoes to be able to wear again.

you can find it on payless.com
dsw.com
and also charlotterusse.com
forever21.com

If there is any wrong please correct it for me:)

1.We talked about cultural phenomena that we know during class.
2.I hate places which have an alien environment.
3.For a very long time his death was concealed from her.
4.His words dispelled our fears.
5.I hope you can read his scrawl.
6.We have a lot of readership in our magazine.
7.He made an exponential growth this year.
8.I cannot take his antics anymore.
9.She can win because she had an indomitable spirit.
10.I have every confidence that this decision will be fully vindicated.
11.John dislikes urban life because of all the traffic.
12.I could elicit no response from Mark.
13.I got information about this shop from interpersonal communication.
14.The dove is a symbolic of peace.
15.I had a strong sense of déjà vu when I saw him.
16.It is commonplace to hand in your homework on the due date.
17.Transaction is crucial for any company.
18.She gave a novel idea during the meeting
19.Alice underwent major surgery this summer.
20.Parents should give children books that stimulate them.
21.I think these statistics are misleading.
22.I like doing leisure activities during the summer.
23.We moved to a very affluent neighborhood.
24.I am going to try to get a lean body before the summer ends.
25.For the presentation we got into a scarcity of resources.
26.We expect the market to mushroom in the next three years.
27.The car accelerated to take over us.
28.We found out interesting information from the poll.
29.When Kelly comes we have to look nonchalant.
30.She gave an absurd look at me during class.

thank you:)

14. i think symbolic should be the word symbol
but other than that everythings spelled correctly :]

Main Characters: Zaria, Lex (short for Alexavier)

Plot: (bare with me because I’m extremely terrible at explaining things and summarizing stuff) Zaria has never had anybody. She grew up in a children’s home in Atlanata and was one of the ones who never gets adopted. She’s 18 now and on her own. Her life isn’t going to well because she lives in the projects and has to work as a maid in a hotel. But all that’s the backstory and not super important. So she decides try to figure out who she is. She’s not interested in starting a relationship with her parents, she just wants to know who she is so she can have some sort of identity. She goes back to the Home and starts doing research. She gets a name of this city called Unknown ( I haven’t come up with a cool original name yet so if you have suggestions that would be nice.) and she decides to search for it. Some creepy old dude (haven’t figured out how they meet) tells her it is located behing the rock wall at Stone Moutain park and she isn’t sure if he’s forreal or drunk but she decides to search anyway. She goes through the wall and Badaboom! She’s in Unknown. She thinks she dreaming because the place is weird and different. (anyways i’m going to try to shorten this by just leaving out details and putting in the major points)
-She finds out she’s a witch and this where I have trouble because I don’t want people to think it’s Harry Potter wannabe or lookalike. Also it’s not just a story with witches/wizards because it will also include or things like werewolves, vampires (not Twiight) and other magical things.
-She moves there and starts college. I also have trouble with this because with the HP plot I don’t want readers to assume it’s like Hogwarts because it will be wayyyyyyy different.
-Makes friends and etc and other stuff you do when you go to college. Gets part time job.
-Falls in love with Lex although she couldn’t stand him at first and they go through a bunch of drama in their relationship.
-Finds out she’s actually the lost princess of city/counrty Unknown who was lost after palace was attacked by Mafia thingy (no name yet)
-Finds out mafia thingy wants to kill her for the pendant she has that has the power to bring back the dead (or something cool and interesting like that but I can’t come up with anything. i’m not really a gothic scifi type so the whole dead thing isn’t my thing so if you have any ideas that would help too.) They want the pendant to take over the country and/or world. They can’t use it because it will only work for the one who rightfully possesses it and the only way they can posses it is if A) she gives it to them or b) they kill her. That’s why they attacked the palace and killed her parents but her dad gave the pendant to her before they captured him.
-Anyways a bunch of other college drama things and the mafia begin to come after her.
-In the end, she mangages to defeat one important member of the mafia which leaves off for sequels and her life is good. (not the mushy gushy happy ending though.)
It’s cool about being honest. I’m trying to better myself as a writer and that means you have to take criticism. That’s why I asked this question because I know some parts are cliched but I need new ideas. It’s kind of hard because pretty much every story idea is cliched or recycled because it’s been done already. Anyways thanks for your help.

Not to sound like I am trash-talking you, and I know I won’t get the best answer because of what I am about to write, but I feel that I have to be honest. It seems like you just jumbled a bunch of plots from different stories together (City of Ember, Harry Potter, etc.) You also seemed to take a lot of cliched ideas (parents are murdered but give her something valuable right before they die, falling in love with the guy you hate, growing up in an orphanage and never getting adopted, lost princess, being hunted down for something given to her that she never thought much of, etc.) Also, the way she discovers the city is kind of weird. Also, you kind of flip flop between real life and magical/sci-fi things. I mean, the mafia hunting down a lost witch princess who lived in the projects, but now lives in a town hidden in a state park? That is kind of confusing.

I know this is harsh, but my advice is to go back to the drawing board. Maybe you could re-use a couple of ideas, but really you need something fresh.

I know people will try to suck up to you and say, "Ohmigod, that sounds soooo good. I so want to read it!", but I feel that I have to be honest. I only say that kind of stuff when something sounds original and exciting, and your story idea just isn’t doing that for me. I really am sorry, but that is just my opinion.

Hope I helped!

♥

If your gf isn’t prepared to do that then let HER go, because she can’t have it both ways.

You don’t need to hurt him, just be honest with him. If he can’t respect that you and your gf are in love and neither of you want to have sex with anyone else then he’s a dickh**d and blind as a bat.

What I’d do, and this is really, really wild, I’d invite him to watch you and your girlfriend making love. He’ll run a mile, I betcha! If not, well, it could be fun!

Clue 1

End here to play Seattle’s annual quest,

Meet hidden red-legged frog in the west.

A stately species with more call than bark,

Naturally admired for its blushing heart.

Clue 2

The silent coast can oft be found,

Leaping in tune with rippling sound.

Coursing in cloister, this much evolved creature,

Hiding beneath when found in nature.

Clue 3
From City’s woodland "Year of the Frog" leaps,

To a temperate locale, via bustling streets.

Feel confident heading down the right track,

No second guessing when the Zoo’s got your back.

Clue 4

Changes from green with just one degree,

Contrary to name, lives not in a tree.

Kids know the Amphibian of Washington State,

Leads a chorus of voices looking for dates.

Clue 5

Settlers leapt in and trees fast fell,

Fragile landscape soon bid farewell.

Urban vigor was built to accommodate,

Once there were more, now two less than eight.

Clue 6

Crabs from the forest met three brothers,

Then pitched to the glow, one after the other.

Told from the totems of ancient descent,

Her tears of protection etch her torment.

Clue 7

The yearn to discover may soon be quenched,

Structure your goal with respect to the French.

The bottom line is your right to reserve,

A soothing place to relax and conserve.

I think clue number 7 is the statue of liberty in Alki Beach. – replica of the one in NY

Just read it and at the end ill explain why its f**king stupid.

Body: don;t stop reading you will regret it!
girl meets a boy on a messenger

crazy1 86: hey baby!!!
h0tNsPiCy91: who is this???
crazy1 86: ur secret admirer!!!!!
h0tNsPiCy91: oh really…. quit lyin! who is this???
crazy1 86: i loved u the first time a stared in your eyes…
crazy1 86: i think about u everyday… you are my dream come true.

crazy1 86: we met once! i dont think u remember tho.

crazy1 86: i cut myself because the pain takes away my feelings of u
h0tNsPiCy91: ..WHO IS THIS!?!?!?
crazy1 86:dont worry…. ill take very good care of you…
crazy1 86 had signed off.

The girl was so scared she locked all her doors and windows. She made sure her room was secured. She wasn’t sure if it was a joke or for real. She didn’t know when he was going to come. The girl was so frightened she decided to sleep with her little sister. Her parents found her dead the next morning. She was completely skinned and hanging in her sister’s closet. The younger sister was also found skinned and dead.

PART 2…
Two years after the Smith sisters deaths, the parents had a baby boy. The girl’s room became a guest room and the little sister’s room where the murder took place became the baby’s room. The baby grew up to be a successful kid. One night he was on the computer and received an instant message.

h0tNsPiCy91: Hey lil bro!!!
2seXay4u: Who the eff is this?
h0tNsPiCy91: It’s your big sis.

2seXay4u: This is some kinda joke, huh?
h0tNsPiCy91: Mom and dad never told you?

h0tNsPiCy91: I died 15 years ago with your other older sister.

h0tNsPiCy91: We were murdered in your room which was once my little sister’s room. She was killed in bed when I was sleeping. I was killed in the closet and skinned to death.

2seXay4u: Quit lying. I never had a sister. If I did my parents would have told me. Whatever. Your stupid.

h0tNsPiCy91: You don’t believe me? Well if you wanna look in your closet h0tNsPiCy91: I carved my name and the time and date I was being murdered. Then I carved my little sister’s name.

h0tNsPiCy91: If you don’t believe me little brother check the internet.

Google on ”Smith sisters murdered anonymously”
h0tNsPiCy91: I gtg little brother. I love you and mom and dad soo much. I can’t believe they kept us a secret from you.

The boy checked the closet. He saw the carvings. Was it true? He surfed the internet and information was there about the anonymous murder in the house. The next morning the boy went downstairs. It was so quiet.

Maybe his parents were sleeping Hours later the boy found
parents in their closet skinned and hanged. Then he found more carvings on the ground. They said ”I TOLD YOU I WASN’T LYING LITTLE BROTHER, I LOVED MOM AND DAD…. BUT THEY KEPT ME A SECRET.

I CAN’T BELIEVE
THEY HID ME FROM YOU WELL I’M FREE FROM THIS COLD WORLD, I WON’T HURT YOU LIKE I HURT them
I LOVE YOU!"
- LISA SMITH

This is a death chain letter. If you don’t repost this in the next hour, the parents from the story will kill you at night.

They will kill you!
DON’T BELIEVE ME? LOOK IT UP IN GOOGLE!
gurls repost as- a pic of my bf
boys repost as-a pic of my gf

DONT LOOK IT UP IN GOOGLE, THIS CHAIN HAS BEEN GOING FOR YEARS AND PEOPLE ARE MAKING SH*T OF IT.

Depending on what version of the story you recieved, there’s some flaws.
Like if she had something sharp to carve into the wood, why didn’t she stab her attacker?
if it really did happen then people would see it on tv and they would have a tape of the whole crime scene. and it proably wasnt "and urban legend that happened a long long time ago" becuase they were like IMing. anyway… i think not.
Also how would a ghost instant message someone
IM didint fully start till 1997 so how could this of happened.
Rather than running and screaming she hides in the closet.

WTF…
Stop posting the chain letters they are bull.

I LOVE Chain letters !!! I take an almost sadistic Delight -in Deleting them as FAST as I can ! …-Used to be; I’d forward them off to all the People (& Businesses) I Hated… -But THAT didn’t "work", because I’d always get TWICE as many of the SAME ONES- back ! Now, I just "mow them down", & KNOW that I am making the World (Wide Web)- a better Place!

I feel I need to help people, and that is what I want to do, but not like the teacher, social worker way. I want to help the people who REALLY need it, like the starving people in Africa, or the people in Haiti. Which brings me to the fact that I want to travel. I am so tired of being in urban/suburban areas, I want to see somewhere different, I want to experience a new culture, I want to meet new people. I also don’t want to travel forever, I want to eventually be able to settle down and have a family, and having a family with a job that requires constant travel makes everyone else’s life hell, and I really don’t want to do that to my kids.

I have considered applying for the Peace Corp, but it is unbelievably hard to get accepted. I have also considered joining the Navy or Army.

I am so confused with what I want to do right now, and to be honest it’s kind of making me a tad depressed, but I really need some help with my decision, so.. please help me out.

you need to became an Emergency medical technician. you’ll never regret it.!!!! just try it. you’ll love it!!!!

The United Nations has assigned an official, “a special rapporteur on the right to adequate housing,” to check the city’s affordable housing. The rapporteur, Raquel Rolnik, is to tour the city for the next three days with housing advocates and city officials to “hear the voices of those who are suffering on the ground,” she said.

The United Nations Human Rights Council appoints a rapporteur, or independent experts, to investigate human rights conditions around the world. In the case of Ms. Rolnik, a professor of urban planning at the University of Sao Paulo in Brazil, her “mission” is to tour New York City and six other places in the United States and to report back to the United Nations General Assembly about housing rights violations and advances.

After that, “We send off letters to governments to ask, ‘Is this true? What’s going on?’ and to please intervene,” she said.

Housing advocates will be taking Ms. Rolnik to the Atlantic Yards site in Brooklyn to see the results of the government’s use of eminent domain to seize property; to the New York City Housing Authority’s Grant Houses in Harlem to see how public housing residents live; and to the Bronx to meet residents whose landlords are in foreclosure.

http://cityroom.blogs.nytimes.com/2009/10/23/special-rapportuer/

Worthless organization.